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all right
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
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Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 04:38:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Its not fair
though life never is
I try
oh how I try
I want to make this right
make everything right
But somehow
this is not my fate
When things look bright
Your there to crush it
One day
hopefully soon
I will prevail
things will be allright
Copyright ©
vampyrekiss
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2008-05-21 04:38:11]
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Re: all right
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by Muinanyere on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 06:39:30 AM AEST
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| I like this, even it's shortness.It's done very well. |
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Re: all right
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 07:42:27 AM AEST
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A lovely write....short and sweet...
Jenni |
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Re: all right
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 09:38:10 AM AEST
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You said so much with few words lovely work as always.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: all right
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by holy on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 12:32:30 PM AEST
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| lovely words, I can see your feelings. |
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Re: all right
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by blackrose233 on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 02:25:18 AM AEST
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| Short and sweet, I like it a lot sounds beautiful, and powerful |
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