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Entry Granted...Exodus Forbidden
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 12:58:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Upon gates of obsidian and onyx
Through the bars weary eyes do gaze
Before cracked feet a street paved in cobblestone
All sense of peace escapes and its only fear that stays
Voices speak from within shadows hidden
From beyond prison gates entered under free will
Demons not much different from the conscience that guides
Tears no longer clear but a shade of crimson an ocean do fill
Through catacombs vast like city streets
Walking around with no certain destination
Apart from dim candlelight darkness overwhelms
As heart and soul begin to ache reality sets in that there is no salvation
As a free soul your entry was granted
But now shackled and chained, no exit in sight, exodus is now forbidden
2008
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ingeniusidiot
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2008-05-21 00:58:36]
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Re: Entry Granted...Exodus Forbidden
(User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 03:49:19 AM AEST
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| Your descriptions and word usage soar beyond all expectation! This is a great poem!! |
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Re: Entry Granted...Exodus Forbidden
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 07:43:29 AM AEST
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Brillantly written.
Beautiful images and your words just fill in the reader.
Wonderful job
Take care
Christina |
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