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~Solar Winds~
Contributed by
Loellntrepid
on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 12:18:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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~Solar winds serinade tha beat of drums clouds form each passing day earths waters at play mountains rise higher setting their rightfull place below vallies are made where grass can be seen danceing among high noon rays flying above birds of prey scan and await here a man sits tha beating of his heart far from pain while solar winds serinade~
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Re: ~Solar Winds~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 08:32:41 PM AEST
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WOW! Another amazing right...This was rather beautiful...I dont see how you could classify it as being dark though...
Great Job!
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Re: ~Solar Winds~
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 09:18:46 AM AEST
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I do not see this as dark but awwwwww so darn beautiful. There is just something about your work that always makes me escape with you dancing in the words. I need to dance so thanks ya for that!
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Re: ~Solar Winds~
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 06:48:28 AM AEST
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| I really liked this, good write :) |
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