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Moments
Contributed by
ratty
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Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 04:36:47 AM in AEST
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Enter my soul, at any request
We're all still born, there's no life, sure, no death
The air you breath is 4 the moment
Deadly dirt is spread all-over
U don't excist
Copyright ©
ratty
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2008-05-20 04:36:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Moments
(User Rating: 1 ) by poewhit on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 05:42:28 AM AEST (User
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You have to breath between the air. POEWHIT |
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Re: Moments
(User Rating: 1 ) by Muinanyere on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 06:50:13 AM AEST (User
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I really liked this, very well done. |
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