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Hard Deployment Days
Contributed by
Adriean
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Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 03:04:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She walks a path of emptiness, feeling so much alone
Her love is gone away from her, When he leaves so does home
The days are not so bad, filled with work and other things
The nights are getting harder, With the empty house it brings
Thoughts of him and where he is, an unavoidable truth
That he's not here not by her side, But gone out fighting and he's not bullet proof
On deploy is where he is, and she's here by herself
Trying to deal with living, And God she could use some help
Everything is going wrong, Nothing she does seems right
This is the way it always is, when he;s nowhere in sight
Things are getting harder, There's no end to the pain
Its as deep as any ocean, and it never goes away
But she puts on a smile, when she hears his voice
She doesnt want him to think, she suffers for his choice
Trying to be supportive, And nothing but brave
When all she wants is him home, to know that he's safe
And then she listens closely, to the way his voice sounds
Its not easy to notice, but he is sounding down
So she tried her hardest, to bring his spirits up
Trying not to say her problems, because her job never stops
Not only is SHE suffering, but he is hurting too
Defending the country and sacrificing is what Military do
Suddenly things dont look so bad, when you see it from the other side
She realizes he misses her too, And she is filled with pride
Yes there will be days, Where she will get distraught
But that will be okay, because one phone call taught
No matter how bad it gets, or impossible the way
Their love will get them through these hard deployment days
Copyright ©
Adriean
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2008-05-20 03:04:24]
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Re: Hard Deployment Days
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by J-A-X on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 03:34:41 AM AEST
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| nice...enjoyable read and i can tell that its real..you should send this to him for a pleasant suprise |
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Re: Hard Deployment Days
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by dreamer_for_eternity on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 05:30:37 AM AEST
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| I really enjoyed that, good flow and scheme of it, unqiue. good ending dawg |
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Re: Hard Deployment Days
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by poewhit on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 05:56:57 AM AEST
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| A womans work is never done. POEWHIT |
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Re: Hard Deployment Days
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 09:05:33 AM AEST
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Beautifully written. Hope it all ends soon and that you're in each others arms before long..
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Re: Hard Deployment Days
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 10:04:52 AM AEST
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This is beautiful. I find a lot of strength and courage in this write. I also admire you for your strength. Being a military wife is not easy. Lovely write
Michelle |
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