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how brave
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 02:46:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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You see my scars
and say how brave
how you've never the courge
I wonder if your crazy
somehow dranged
What I do is not brave
no heroic act
I cut out of despration
to latch onto something real
there is no glory in what I do
You are the brave one
being able to deny the temptation
you who can face life
without running away
So dont look at me
like I did something great
these scars tell my story
my long fall from grace
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vampyrekiss
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2008-05-20 02:46:32]
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Re: how brave
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 06:41:00 AM AEST
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| This is a nice point of view from which to write your poem. I thought it was a great way to look at it, and enjoyed your poem. Be careful for spelling errors. |
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Re: how brave
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by holy on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 12:32:54 AM AEST
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| Your encouragement make me more confident of my future, thank you so much. |
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Re: how brave
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by ratty on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:03:08 PM AEST
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| I like how "clear" it is........Allthought, I dont fully agree with the "brave"-part. Maybe its just how you look at it.......Greetings........ |
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