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Addicted
Contributed by
jessb3
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Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 06:21:22 PM in AEST
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I知 addicted to the fluttering
Of my heart inside my chest
I知 addicted to your smell
It痴 something I like best
I知 addicted to your eyes
I could look at them all day
I知 addicted to the flirting
In the worst possible way
I知 addicted to the warming glow
That burns within my soul
I知 addicted to being near you
It痴 like I致e lost control
I知 addicted to the fantasy
That plays within my mind
I知 addicted to what I think I see
Although I could be blind
I知 addicted to the pain you cause
Perhaps I should let go, but
I知 addicted to you and only you
And I just wanted you to know
Copyright ﾂｩ
jessb3
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2008-05-19 18:21:22]
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Re: Addicted
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by Spike on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 09:03:49 PM AEST
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Thanks for letting me know, but I hardly know you (ha ha).
Infatuation is a great subject - haven't we all been there? and the expression, metre and rhyme were appropriately compelling. The repetition of 'addicted' could have been heavy handed but suited the compulsive aspect of the poem perfectly. Top post.
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Re: Addicted
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by ZiggyB on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 09:41:23 PM AEST
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I love this.
I also liked the repitious use of "I'm addicted."
In my opinion, I believe it shows the depth and sincerity of your feelings.
Excellent write. Keep em' coming.
~ZiggyB
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Re: Addicted
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by Strawberry on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 10:40:38 PM AEST
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a very nice write
i remember the feeling
keep it up =] |
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Re: Addicted
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 01:12:54 AM AEST
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| very nice write..good rhyme scheme and i also liked the repetition of the "i'm addicted to..." this was a very good write. loved it. |
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Re: Addicted
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by vampyrekiss on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 02:50:00 AM AEST
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| love it. |
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