|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
~Death Now Only Sorrow~
Contributed by
Loellntrepid
on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 04:32:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
|
~I felt it inside then deep within leaveing no time to even react forced upon me it happened so fast my fist's clinched shaking while in my mind I began to laugh heart raceing my sight faded all went to black my leg's felt weak thinking I would collapes a dream I thought this had to be but then a rage came and pain strengthening me slowly becoming aware of all that surrounded me it was indeed real I could only lower my head while tear's began to fall there was a realization of it all thaone~2Bcontbycomment
Copyright ©
Loellntrepid
... [
2008-05-19 16:32:15]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: ~Death Now Only Sorrow~
(User Rating: 1 )
by Loellntrepid on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 04:41:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
..Continued..
~Realization of it all tha one I loved is dead and nothing is left now but remorse for all that was not said and what needed to be~ |
|
|
Re: ~Death Now Only Sorrow~
(User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 02:28:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Every poem of yours that I have read has been very deep and emotional. I have rather enjoyed reading your work...Great job.
Rich |
|
|
Re: ~Death Now Only Sorrow~
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 09:21:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beginnings and endings all the circle but at times painful non the less.................... Lovely work
Michelle |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
