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I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
Contributed by
spike
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Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 05:37:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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I only love you from a distance,
but what a sight to behold!
the view from here is picturesque,
if I may be so bold.
When you move into the darkness,
your silhouette’s a tease
the waving of your tresses
like a willow in the breeze.
Your skin is dressed in satin,
it clings to your full chest
the daytime shows you’re pretty
but I’ve seen you at your best.
A favour to an admirer,
for tomorrow night
could you open the bedroom curtain,
just a little to the right?
Copyright ©
spike
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2008-05-18 17:37:59]
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 08:31:05 PM AEST
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omg spike! lol! very gripping this!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by HellRaiser on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 08:51:58 PM AEST
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| hahaha amazing! |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 11:41:24 PM AEST
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Good grief ..
lol
S, it is always such a treat when you let your imagination stretch into the naughty.
I love this piece. We, as humans, love to entertain voyeurism, I think. That's why
those trashy celebrity magazines sell so well. The last stanza is perfect!
Always a pleasure, visiting your work. You are a delight. :)
~Breezy |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by safetyinnumbers on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 12:12:00 AM AEST
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Nice write....funny and well written..... |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by Arijadna77 on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 04:41:35 AM AEST
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| This is kinky...i like it...nice write. |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 04:53:45 AM AEST
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Laughing here...This is so funny....well the last verse is.... I hope she obliges....lol
Jenni |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 10:31:29 AM AEST
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LOL incredible write here! I loved this.
Michelle
*who will pull the blinds all the way down tonight*
ROFLMAO
huggersssssss |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 01:02:28 PM AEST
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lol, this was quite the original write. I liked your final rhymes, they ended the poem on such a clever note.
I wonder if I'll ever watch Rear Window again and not think he's slightly creepy...(well, moreso) |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 06:59:56 PM AEST
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| A witty and honest piece of work, this touches on a subject not many care to write about and when it is its usually nothing as intelligent and entertaining as this, very well done, really teasing the senses and no wonder theres a good few comments here, were a curious race with odd habits and youve portrayed one of the most curious with ease, great work!! |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by ratty on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 09:12:07 AM AEST
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| GREAT written........very funny written.........Simply said, I love it....... |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by elle on
Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 10:51:33 AM AEST
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| "like a willow in the breeze" I love it. bravo. . . elle |
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Re: I am Curious, Poet (Voyeur Amour)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th July 2008 @ 05:19:11 AM AEST
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| Ha, well done Spike. I like the graphic too, very fitting. It's also a disturbingly romantic poem if it weren't for the intention of the subject! |
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