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My World
Contributed by
roddy
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Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 03:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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In the world I see...you roam carelessly up and down the hills of endless green pastures. Famine, disease, death are nothing but aforementioned struggles. You lay down as to feel the essecne of the summer storm making its way to earth. Life is your sandbox. The joviality of it all birngs you to your knees in pure, unfiltered rebirth. Captialism, commerce, poltics, war these words mean nothing to you. You are the shaper of your destiny the captian of your soul.
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roddy
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2008-05-18 15:36:49]
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Re: My World
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 03:58:33 PM AEST
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That would be heaven on Earth.
You are a very deep thinker and in my book that means great writing.
Good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My World
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by Arijadna77 on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 04:46:51 AM AEST
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| You are a good soul,Roddy...This is very ...very everything:)) |
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Re: My World
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by shelby on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 10:42:38 AM AEST
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Sounds perfect to me. Loved the thought of it all .
Nicely done and thanks for the dream
Michelle |
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Re: My World
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 11:00:43 AM AEST
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| This was excellent, the imagery came alive for me! |
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