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serenity after chaos
Contributed by
owkenny
on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 02:43:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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First time we meant, knew i wanted to take a risk
another chance to erase what i became and forget
Not like the last time, This time im not gonna miss
wasnt too long before we started with a kiss
relationship, you made me feel great
i cherised it, and much more than just in physical state
I got careless, i made one simple mistake
cant bury it, alone again just as fate
i corrected all my wrongs
Pleaded with you all night long
went against my beliefs i hold so strong
now all thats left for you is this song
the one thing i did not comprehend
was something that your last relationship didnt end
you love him and used me to better your real boyfriend
this is the end, taking the rest of my pride to never go home again.
you lied to me, but would never admit
dont know if it was i love you or that you were sure of it
doesnt matter not one bit
cause to me your just a dead spirit.
the rainbows have faded
butterflies have all migrated
the last thing i would have appreciated
just let me escape this
Copyright ©
owkenny
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2008-05-17 14:43:20]
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Re: serenity after chaos
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by shelby on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 05:38:06 PM AEST
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Sounds like a love triangle gone bad ughhhhh.
Being serious now this is overall a good write.
There is an intensity I like.
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Re: serenity after chaos
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 05:06:41 AM AEST
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A sad but beautifully written poem..
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