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~No Looking Back~
Contributed by
Loellntrepid
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Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 01:06:50 AM in AEST
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~Reveal your strength tha armour of fate forged by faint cries caused by others hate set tha stage and partake justice never too late sharpen your soul and give cause to your sword and know pain is what it will give so others may live again seal away thoughts of doubt and drink in this rain of change their drought from laughter and joy so hardens their ways step forth and open tha door reawaken tha rage allow it's empowerment heat your vains as sweat and blood shall free tha tamed and give life~2bcontinued
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Re: ~No Looking Back~
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by Loellntrepid on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 01:22:54 AM AEST
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...Continued...
~And give life to those now among tha grave bid farewell to tha life once held no sorrow to be felt mounting you must now ride into hell and though you know this shall be what you find salvation awaits in your eye's no looking back justice comes at last~ |
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Re: ~No Looking Back~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 01:35:02 AM AEST
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The more of your work that I read the more and more I am coming to like it. I have said before that you have a different style....well being different can be good...You have written another amazing piece.....great work
rich |
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Re: ~No Looking Back~
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 04:31:23 AM AEST
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i think that this is so oddly written thats its fantastic!
great job!
well done! |
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Re: ~No Looking Back~
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by ratty on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 12:23:55 PM AEST
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| Maybe its me.....but it took me a little time to have pictures by the words....I believe I like this..... |
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Re: ~No Looking Back~
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by owkenny on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 02:49:32 PM AEST
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| its good but punctuation would make it easier to read. the content itself though, great |
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Re: ~No Looking Back~
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 09:23:51 AM AEST
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I felt so much while reading this I have a couple tears.
Lovely work
Michelle |
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Re: ~No Looking Back~
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 06:53:32 AM AEST
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| Very nice, good write. |
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