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Rottin' rain
Contributed by
ratty
on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 10:51:21 AM in AEST
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Sister of all sisters, Still the pearl girl
Poor girl with empty thoughts
That's my lady
Eyes follow you, you do what I say
On your knees, baby
Lord
My forgiveness of pray
Demons inhabited the soul
I must C the ghosts
Must C death
Must C pain
Feel this rottin' rain
Insane
I feed my brain
Copyright ©
ratty
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2008-05-16 10:51:21]
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Re: Rottin' rain
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 11:25:29 AM AEST
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Different, but a great piece of writing.
Deadwriter
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Re: Rottin' rain
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by ingeniusidiot on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 12:08:24 AM AEST
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Different indeed..but in a good way..great write.
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Re: Rottin' rain
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by safetyinnumbers on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 11:05:10 PM AEST
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Interesting write....I like how it flows real nicely...good work... |
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