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ratio
Contributed by
elle
on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 06:36:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I became surrender
the moment
I invited you in. . .
I became a longing
that has it's beauty
tucked away into
the sound of the ocean. . .
I weep
& the ocean & I
become one.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2008-05-16 06:36:39]
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Re: ratio
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 09:29:21 AM AEST
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very lovely work here. You bring so much to a small write. Nicely done.
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Re: ratio
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 10:49:50 AM AEST
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Who says great things don't come in small packages? This is one of those great things.
Deadwriter
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Re: ratio
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by safetyinnumbers on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 03:27:43 PM AEST
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A short and beautiful piece....Nice work... |
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