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~Walk With Me~
Contributed by
Loellntrepid
on
Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 12:34:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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~A sobering bliss no day's left to remaness a pain dwells within is it even possable to defend look in my eye's and past my foreboding grin take your time I'll wait for you now step closer I wish not to deceive though know my path can only misslead you and watch as my hate burns and embrace this while it forms can you feel tha air how it's changed close your eye's now breath in light is it meditation an escape you seek if so come stand with me at this cliff's edge silence now tha windbeginstospeak2bcont...
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Re: ~Walk With Me~
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by shelby on
Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 12:49:29 PM AEST
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This is really pretty and has a nice tone.
It would be nice to see it written in stanza's,
in this format I feel it takes away from the beauty of it.
Keep up the beauty in the word!
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Re: ~Walk With Me~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Saturday, 17th May 2008 @ 01:38:59 AM AEST
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yet another beautiful piece...Great work
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