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LoelIntrepid
Contributed by
knightonline
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Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 06:29:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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~I sit here by myself as these words come to mind surrounded by lifeless woods how well I hide while calamity fills my mind broken is my voice so sent upon papper of my inner void I do write yet ensnared like that of defeating lie's and favor finds me not darkened becomes my sight light upon my path I do not find how well in these woods I do hide~
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Re: LoelIntrepid
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th May 2008 @ 10:55:08 AM AEST
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I liked this very much. It would be nice to see it in stanza's though..... Just my opinion.
Lovely work
I like your screen name as well
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Re: LoelIntrepid
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by Loellntrepid on
Sunday, 18th May 2008 @ 05:46:16 AM AEST
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