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~A Sinking feelling~
Contributed by
Loellntrepid
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Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 02:31:43 AM in AEST
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~A sinking feelling that of despair inner wings cut slowly falling deep only fear now impact as dust surrounds sorrow in tha air no sound able to be made justice given to a soul left to fade eye's weakly open and rest upon a darkened horizon this fate a heart which resisted deeper now to struggle is in vain how so did this come to be how when fought with a strength only found in dreams all hope withered like that of decayed tree's for of hate Ididfeedandthereforsentasmywillbegantobleedthispitmadeofmydeeds~
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Re: ~A Sinking feelling~
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by ingeniusidiot on
Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 04:56:42 AM AEST
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You write in an interesting format...its different...
~A sinking feelling that of despair inner wings cut slowly falling deep only fear now impact as dust surrounds sorrow
This part speaks volumes...very well done..I look forward to more of your work
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Re: ~A Sinking feelling~
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by JERRYDA on
Friday, 20th January 2012 @ 01:25:37 AM AEST
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| nice one dia my friend. If shakespaer should read this he'lld do you a thumbs up |
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