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4 more years

Contributed by mnava18 on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 07:16:42 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

saw you walking by ,
during 3rd period break.
Caught your smile out the corner of my eye.
A rush of joy bellows through me,
My breath begins to shorten,
and my heartbeat quickens.

For four years ive chased you,
waiting for that perfect day.
My feelings were never easy to explain.
but always meant for you , difficult to contain.

With every smile and every minute that passes , i endure the pain
of not knowing what might have been.
In the back of my mind I ponder consequences,
as my lonley heart breaks in the distance.

I watch the flowers on the ground sway as you walk by them.
Cant you see what you do to me?
all our memories will never fade from me, locked away in my heart youll always stay.
Ill always love you more than youll ever know.
If i only had 4 more years, to get it out.

Copyright © mnava18 ... [ 2008-05-14 19:16:42]
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Re: 4 more years (User Rating: 1 )
by -Nik-91- on Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 07:53:18 PM AEST
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good write
but i think you should tell him how you feel
i mean 4 years is a really long time and its 4 years of your life which you cant get back

keep writting

Nikki xxx

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