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Let Her Know
Contributed by
crow
on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 02:28:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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A scent of Her is in the wind,
one Summer dance
your mind goes back.
I dream of Her..
and I need Her...
I just can`t let Her go..
the last thing on my mind..
I never let Her know.
One stays behind
One moves ahead.
and the world goes by
you wonder if you had.
And you think of Her..
and you need Her..
You just can`t let Her go,
the last thing on your mind
You never let Her know.. Vincent
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Re: Let Her Know
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 02:36:10 PM AEST
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I love this and I am glad you decided to post it.
One moves ahead
and the world goes by
how true that is.......
It is the thinking that makes it isn't it??
hugs n kisses
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Let Her Know
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 03:09:08 PM AEST
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This is really sweet and beautifull.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Let Her Know
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 03:27:24 PM AEST
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Nicely done, both touching and moving ...
The things we take for granted ....
I loved this stanza
One stays behind
One moves ahead.
and the world goes by
you wonder if you had.
Peace
~Shannon
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