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For Brett
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 12:54:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A sway of thought, a gentle breeze,
It all fell apart with the greatest of ease.
Nearby lovers now my rearview mirror,
Loved one long lost may appear nearer.
We must now burn the bridge or repair,
Either way, I must know you care.
Watching as the lovers slowly kiss,
I remember everything that I miss.
I feel as if I loved without knowing,
Hiding away the side I wasn’t showing.
Begging just wait, I’m slow to simmer,
Soon, however, the lights got dimmer.
I made mistakes; I’ll be glad to admit,
But in the end, I was willing to commit.
I wanted to try; that was something new,
I wanted to try; it was all for you.
As dangerous as a left turn on red,
Our unspeakable connection was dead.
As lovers trek on, glad to be glad,
I’ll be missing what we had.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2008-05-14 12:54:26]
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Re: For Brett
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 01:36:09 PM AEST
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wow, even in it's sadness one can find beauty in your luvly heart.
hang tuff, keep writing.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: For Brett
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 01:41:52 PM AEST
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Truly beautiful... loved this line...
"Our unspeakable connection was dead."
I guess it's the same as watching a mother with a new born babe when your own child had been taken from you....
Jenni |
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