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Something more than this
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
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Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 01:48:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Nothing is the way it's supposed to be
Isn't there supposed to be something more than this?
Things are good, but there's a fear in me
There's something out there that I might miss
I feel nervous, like I've done something wrong
Or was supposed to do something, but didn't do it at all
I feel everything is taking too long
And maybe, I should just let it be, give up and let fall
I want something more than this
I want the extraordinary, the excitement, the freedom
I can't accept this life for what it is
I'll set this life back on track, which the world took me from
Though I feel alone in my strain
The world resting on my shoulders
It wakes from the deep a slow, searing pain
And now the world suddenly seems colder.
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2008-05-14 01:48:11]
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Re: Something more than this
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 04:21:37 AM AEST
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It is amazing how people how dont know each other share similar things in life...you have an amazing talent...I look forward to reading more of your work.
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Re: Something more than this
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by purplestary on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 10:27:01 AM AEST
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very interesting write.. makes one think alot. i especially like the end. "it wakes from the deep and slow, searing pain
and now the world suddenly seems colder." you have an amazing talent. |
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Re: Something more than this
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 09:30:03 AM AEST
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I loved this you sound just like me. We can make our path and we can be the untamed spirit we are meant to be............ I hope you know how special you are .
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