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Inspection of the soul
Contributed by
gribba
on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hurled across the morning sky,
bowing to the goddess,
screaming of two dimensions
as they crash together.
One human
one goddess.
Humiliated,
as they appear naked
swirling in the golden atmosphere.
Eyes locked on one destination.
Unspecified bodies
in position
to start racing to the goal,
tasting the infinite victory.
Copyright ©
gribba
... [
2003-03-13 18:40:00]
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Re: Inspection of the soul
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 08:01:08 PM AEST
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| beautifully written.. wow. |
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Re: Inspection of the soul
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 11:12:52 AM AEST
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Awesome!! I absolutely love it!! Blessed be,
~ Moonlit Angel |
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Re: Inspection of the soul
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM AEST
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I think you will feel "at home" in my concept of "The first and last commandment" You seem to coincide with part of my poem in an
intriguing way.
Your ability to "paint mental pictures" is more clourfull than mine |
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