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The devil smiled
Contributed by
safetyinnumbers
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Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 12:32:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I sold my soul to the devil
he said ‘no way, no thanks!’
I sold my soul to Jesus
he said ‘okay, let’s go!’
and so we went for a ride
and all the while the devil smiled
we went up and down
and in and around
we went to the highs and lows
of this life I forever know
and the ins and outs
of my hopes and doubts
when the ride was done
he dropped me by the side
and politely said goodbye
and the devil sat and smiled
and the devil sat and smiled.
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Re: The devil smiled
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 12:37:12 PM AEST
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I liked the concept of this.I find it refreshing to see original ideas.
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Re: The devil smiled
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 11:24:52 PM AEST
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| Interesting...I liked the idea of it...it is diefferent...good job. |
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Re: The devil smiled
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by Arijadna77 on
Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 07:21:28 PM AEST
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The road that most of us follows...Light and deep at the same time.I dont know if this poem is written after Existence,but it fits well.
Good job:) |
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