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divine..
Contributed by
jnep
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Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 07:39:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lonely, The whispers stop aloft a hallowed shrine.
I breathe and step inside the passages within to witness something sublime.
The passage of time has long ravaged its sacred walls, but one thing stands true.
As the hands of time move against us and as we grow old, ill still be loving you.
As I tread these divine grounds, each moment passes like an eternity.
I think of my life passed, and how much you truly mean to me.
Fallen petals all around, as tranquility calms my soul.
I now see what i have finally found, the one that make me whole.
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jnep
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2008-05-13 19:39:30]
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Re: divine..
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 08:51:38 PM AEST
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real beautiful and nice imagery.
love how it seems to be based around somewhere holy or something, and how you keep that theme throughout.
i wanna know where you are!
anyways yeh lovely poem! |
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Re: divine..
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 10:37:32 AM AEST
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"As the hands of time move against us and as we grow old, ill still be loving you"
How truly romantic..Loved this..
Jenni |
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