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Your worry

Contributed by holy on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 02:07:37 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Your worry

The following day after I sent mail to you

I received your second letter

I was not wondered inside your mail what would be told

because you was a very smart person with a soft heart

I guessed you were too worried about me to write me the next letter

and you hoped the following words would comfort my emotion

to develop a more close relation

As expected

you gave me a hot kiss at first

I could felt that you were calling my name very passionate

You told me

you were more worried about me after the first letter you sent

even you were afraid

if I would have some wrong thought to read your mood

"I left you alone would hurt you,

but I had to leave early.

You know,

I like to leave the best bits till last,

so we had not exchange a final kiss before we parted."

"I can't wait to write you the letter,

I hope you will feel better.

many things is recalled as a treater,

it is beginning to get lighter

I must stop my memories to have a short rest

I hope you all right

let me send a red rose to you my sweet

many loves from your sweetheart"

I was so happy having your spirits

I was so excited reading your words

how touching your letter was

how informing your thought was

Yes

like you said

separation happen all the time in our lifetime

it will be a very nice chance to create our new home

I opened my pen again to write you my letter

I hoped you not to worry me any more

"I am very happy every day,

I have no any complaint,

I am reading your letter again and again,

I feel the same way,

everything home is going well,

please believe we have the same soul."

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-05-13 14:07:37]
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Re: Your worry (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 02:18:44 PM AEST
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This is a sweet write.. I felt a tenderness and love in this write. Nothing better than a letter is there??

Michelle

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