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~Awakened Dream~
Contributed by
Loellntrepid
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Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 07:30:20 AM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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~Realization of this world and all its domination becomes to much to bare liveing in death so taken by fear tareing you apart as tears fall by grace withholding each breath as if it could be tha last to take and by this my beleifs come alive in tha thoughts you wish to hide while you pray to gods your no longer able to find like that of tha entraping grave which your soul only to yeild and rot then to dust soon thereafter to be forgot so like are my thoughts I shall never entrust~
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Re: ~Awakened Dream~
(User Rating: 1 ) by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 14th May 2008 @ 03:41:22 AM AEST (User
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In so few word I think that you have described the world in which we live quite well...you have an amazing talent. I look forward to reading more of you work.
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