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Deciet
Contributed by
spend782
on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 07:08:01 AM in AEST
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DarkPoetry
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it was alll a lie,
a trick a snare your
deciet why did i believe
it when you said you loved me
in the begginig i was
timid shy unsure,treating
me like playdo you molded
me into something impure,
but other than that
i knew it was love ,the
way you looked at me and
said i was your angel from above,
than later on things became
different, never returning
my calls all of the e-mails
i sent,
than one day i saw you kissing
someone new, I was filled
with saddness, and jealousy,
as my heart broke in 2,
As I walked home it began
to rain, collapsing across
the ground I cried out
all the sadness and pain,
as the days went on all
jealousy and anger went
away ,but unfortunately
the depression was there to stay,
doctors tried to put this
mental illness to rest,
but the girl knew there
there was only 1 soulution
DEATH
the girl was there all
alone, nobody else there at home
to witness the slits in her writst
caused by the unforgiving crome,
with one deep cut she saw a
quick flash, of her and him
having a picnic on a nice
summers day in the grass,
she gasped sharply taking
one last brath, before entering
into the darkness into a
everlasting death.
Copyright ©
spend782
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2008-05-13 07:08:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Deciet
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th May 2008 @ 01:24:08 PM AEST (User
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Sad write here but done with skill.
Hun no guy is worth is specially if he is a lying two timing player.......... chew em up spit em out (wink)
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Re: Deciet
(User Rating: 1 ) by samray33 on
Sunday, 15th January 2012 @ 02:59:16 PM AEST (User
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No one is ever worth falling to pieces over. But it's only human nature that when we find ourselves So heavily in love, or rather, enamored with someone, we lose sight of what is important and that is our personal well being and bright new futures. I can relate to losing my mind as in this poem but not to such a complete extent. |
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