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Beyond the Moon
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 01:27:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Floating
With the stars
Calm tonight
Beyond the moon
Anything happens
In the lovely lights.
Spill
At the seams
Tonight,
You will lie down
And drift off deeper
Just-visible,
We rust.
Decompose.
Copyright ©
eeeitak
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2008-05-12 13:27:22]
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Re: Beyond the Moon
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by zenith66 on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 04:03:14 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed reading this, nice short and sweet, the feeling of softness flowed out of each line, the last two lines grabbed me as very very good, well done!!! keep it up, |
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Re: Beyond the Moon
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by Desideratum on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 05:48:59 PM AEST
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| Short and sweet. |
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Re: Beyond the Moon
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by shelby on
Saturday, 28th June 2008 @ 02:18:25 PM AEST
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Beautiful, a perfect night and you captured it with a touch of softness that is relaxing.
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