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The letter back

Contributed by holy on Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 11:59:05 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The letter back

For you

I made one successful record

all the songs were sang by myself and very good

although I was not a pop star

I believed it could reduce your pressure a bit

because

the sound was very familier to you

you could listen to them one by one very slow

you also could close your eyes to enjoy it with circle

I put it and my letter together into the mail

A dozen envelopes

that requires no pastage were enclosed for your convenience in reply

I was also wondered about that myself

if you saw them

maybe you would ask me why

gave you my honest opinion

I was afraid if my letter would be lost on the way

In my letter back

I had told you to use them when you write to me next time

when I saw them using by you

the sunshine would once more light my room

Carefully

I passed the mail to a office postman

once again

I asked the postman for a return

I needed to have a look at the address and your name

I almost made a lots of sound reading the postcode

My mouth opened and shuted

I looked and looked

finally I passed

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-05-12 11:59:05]
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Re: The letter back (User Rating: 1 )
by Desideratum on Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 12:42:19 PM AEST
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Wonderful,

please correct some of the wording and it will be moving.

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