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~With You On My Mind~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 10:26:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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~~^~~
With you on my mind
I tend to find
My eyes are always glowing.
The things we share,
The way we care,
It’s so great knowing.
With you in my heart,
We’ll never be apart
My lips are always smiling.
The little things you say
Each and every day,
Keep my world a-shining.
With you on my mind,
I seem to be blind
To things that were once essential..
You bring out in me,
The best that I can be,
And help me realize my full potential.
With you in my heart,
Each day is a brand new start.
You make my life so exciting.
I’ll treasure you my friend,
From now until the end,
And I’ll keep saying so in my writing.
With you in my heart,
I feel like a work of art
Cause you always make me feel great.
I know for you things have been rough
Sometimes even a little bit tough,
But they’ve gotten better of late.
With you on my mind,
Each day, myself I remind..
That we live in worlds far apart.
I love you, my friend,
And the time that we do spend,
Know you’ll always have a special place in my heart.
~~^~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
... [
2008-05-12 10:26:46]
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Re: ~With You On My Mind~
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 11:21:50 AM AEST
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Very beautifull, meaningfull, strong, tender masterpeice.
Happy Moms day jen. Our heavenly Mom's are sipping cofee-n-tea and smilin down us this Mom's day.
Luv, big huggs, smiles, friends,
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Re: ~With You On My Mind~
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by Desideratum on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 05:55:10 PM AEST
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| Sounds like you got that fresh feeling. |
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Re: ~With You On My Mind~
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 10:47:51 PM AEST
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A beautiful write for someone who obviously touched your heart.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~With You On My Mind~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 10:02:19 AM AEST
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| i find it intresting i keep stumbling across your writing haha but i like it you are a very gifted writer and i wish you the best in your life :) |
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