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My Angel
Contributed by
moonlight68
on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 12:31:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I walked through the dark , she light my way
so hard was to breath she was the fresh in my air.
Showed me the colors when i could only see black
and all i wished she gave me at once
I slept and woke up i lived and i died
i had her in my arms when i saw her smile.
I felt her love so deep in my heart
so deep when she left was the cut.
She flied away over the rainbow
and now on my sky no sun just a black hole.
Only at nights she comes in my dreams
i kiss the moon and i kiss her lips.
Wish i could leave this life today
fly to heaven to hold her again.
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2008-05-12 00:31:58]
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Re: My Angel
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 08:59:47 AM AEST
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Really touching..I am sorry for your loss...
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Re: My Angel
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by Arijadna77 on
Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 07:17:25 PM AEST
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I told u,u can write:)
This is very nice poem,colored with emotions,free expression...Keep going like this,and u will find many beautiful words inside urself,waiting to be written.
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