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Flood
Contributed by
jen54
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Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 02:02:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here they come again
Breaking through the gates
Nothing now can stop them now
As they flood into my mind
I'm drowning in emotions
Fighting for some air
Now I'm drifting down this river
No one can rescue me
Just stand on back and smile
Cause you don't really care
Copyright ©
jen54
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2008-05-11 14:02:59]
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Re: Flood
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 02:47:02 PM AEST
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nice little work here, good metaphor, hope your ok now!!!
keep it up... |
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Re: Flood
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 08:20:59 AM AEST
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Nicely done...I was actually hoping there was more to read..
Jenni |
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Re: Flood
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by Tiffyo4 on
Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 07:28:16 PM AEST
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| hey nice work are you okay i tired to call you but you didnt answer |
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Re: Flood
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th August 2008 @ 10:44:02 AM AEST
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I like it. It really hit home with that last line.....Cause you don't really care. That really put a lump in my throat.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Flood
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Sunday, 21st December 2008 @ 06:39:29 AM AEST
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| Invoking, Inviting and enticing read |
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