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Reflection of Me
Contributed by
ZiggyB
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Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 09:57:16 PM in AEST
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~*~
Reflection of Me
Look into the mirror
Tell me what you see
Is that image really
A reflection of me
My eyes and features
Is all that’s there
A bearded face
With graying hair
But this we fix
And can re-arrange
Hair color with a shave
And all will change
It does not portray me
Quite as a whole
For that mirror cannot
Reflect on my soul
~*~
2008-04-29
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Re: Reflection of Me
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 11:21:03 PM AEST
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So very true, my poetry friend.... well said!!
I loved this!!
Jenni |
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Re: Reflection of Me
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 01:49:12 AM AEST
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I agree, this is a little gem of a write, very expressive and(as said above) so true, many poems like this can be repetitive and arduos but you made is short sweet and simple, made it a pleasure to read and easy to grasp the meanig, well done very good writing!
keep it up! |
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Re: Reflection of Me
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 08:51:42 AM AEST
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'It does not portray me
Quite as a whole
For that mirror cannot
Reflect on my soul'
i loved this line so much that i might use it in my collection of mottos!
its so true people (and mirrors) can only see whats on the outside
loved this poem!! thank you for writing it xx |
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Re: Reflection of Me
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by 2KsMom on
Thursday, 19th June 2008 @ 02:07:26 AM AEST
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| This one hits my heart. My eyes and features...with graying hair. We often get caught up in what the mirror reflects, instead of paying more attention to each others souls. Thank you--Keep them coming! |
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