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DON'T give up on me
Contributed by
Roddy
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Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 04:43:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The torment inside so black and vile
It fills me up yet I'm empty inside
Hollow, blank, just one big lie
My throat constricts mouth is dry
Lungs fail to expand ,yet I can spell out my cry
I wish could settle to forget it all
But that sordid taste of metal in my mouth makes that lost to me
Lost in my lonely exile
A trail of a thousand tears shed, line what is my melancholy path
My body, lifeless as a cemetary
The pain I feel wicked as a witch's heart
But please never give up on me because I haven't given up yet
Copyright ©
Roddy
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2008-05-10 16:43:06]
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Re: DON'T give up on me
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by SilverRain on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 05:57:13 PM AEST
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| sometimes we have to go there to understand when others are there. You expressed that "down" very well. Good one. |
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Re: DON'T give up on me
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by Arijadna77 on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 09:19:08 PM AEST
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"But please never give up on me because I haven't given up yet"
The most important part! |
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