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Days in the Sun
Contributed by
spike
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Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 02:50:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Long beyond those days in the sun
when flesh and breath are one,
our bones will build the landscapes
of other futures.
What small traces remain,
a thing, a word or human stain
will live after remembrance
and be remade in its own space.
Less important to be different,
sea-grown or heaven sent
when the mystery has no answer
that can be understood.
Instead, the hearts of stars
make us humble containers,
driving our green engines
back into the dust, and history.
Copyright ©
spike
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2008-05-10 14:50:51]
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Re: Days in the Sun
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by emystar on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 04:39:30 PM AEST
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This write takes me way back to Daytona Beach in Florida, USA
Thanks for the awesome write and memory.
Huggs, smiles,
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Re: Days in the Sun
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by SilverRain on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 07:03:25 PM AEST
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Wow Spike...really awesome. A timeless piece, maybe meant that way? Thought provoking.
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Re: Days in the Sun
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by ZiggyB on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 11:29:32 PM AEST
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Spike,
This is deep...and good.
Keep up the good work.
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Re: Days in the Sun
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 07:25:02 AM AEST
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A thought-provoking piece....well written..
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Re: Days in the Sun
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 08:57:18 PM AEST
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this is the kind of poetry that keeps me gong, makes me want to come back here and seek out quality(it seems lacking of late sorry lol) but this really makes you think, i drifted through the stanzas mindfully, considering your well wrought words, the picture sets it up stunningly well done, deep thinking freind!!
keep it up!!
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Re: Days in the Sun
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by Roddy on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 07:20:59 AM AEST
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First off you hsve my esteemed gratitude for your comment on my poem. And I would like to say no matter if its in a poem or a comment you can fully express heavy emotion as well as meaning in a thought. Good job
roddy
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