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He's All You See

Contributed by Bubbles02 on Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 07:32:02 AM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Is this what you wanted?
Did you want all your friends to just walk away?
Because that’s what they’re doing.
But because you’re so damn infatuated with him,
He’s all you see.

Well, let me tell you a story
About a girl like you who liked that same guy.
She got attached and then he moved on, leaving her empty.
She realized that all those kind words he’d told her were a lie.
That girl will never fully recover;
She now also has an eating disorder.

You know this girl;
You two were best friends.
And now…the other girl wonders what she means to you.
Because no matter what she will ever do,
You won’t listen.
It’s all about him;
He’s all you see.
That one girl is dying from the pain,
However, you see none of it.
She’s falling apart,
Watching as you break her already broken heart.
Nothing she does makes you happy;
He’s all you see.

Sometimes I wonder…
Would you really care if I finally allowed myself to go under?

Copyright Â© Bubbles02 ... [ 2008-05-10 07:32:02]
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Re: He's All You See (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 12:38:14 PM AEST
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Gee, Bubbles, the infatuated girl sounds a little like me. LOL!
But seriously, it looks like you really care for your friend.
I was like her once, but I barely remember the story behind it, it was so many years ago.
Anyway, this is a wonderful and heartfelt, caring poem with a lot of emotion in it!
Just remember to keep caring for your friend. She may be grateful in the end.
Keep up the good work, Bubbles!

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