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~You Make Me Smile~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 11:19:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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~~*~~
You make me smile, you really do
No one else does, except a select few.
I look forward to our special time each night
When once more, the world appears bright.
With everyone else, my smile is a fake
Pasted on my face once I’m awake.
Many ignore the pain in my eyes
They don’t realize it’s all a disguise.
Most people never accomplish this feat
That of making my day complete.
But in times gone by and in days anew.
You make me smile, you really do.
~~*~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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2008-05-09 11:19:49]
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Re: ~You Make Me Smile~
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 11:44:01 AM AEST
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Awesome jen,
I know whatt cha mean. My Tarzan makes me smile.
good work.
big huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: ~You Make Me Smile~
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by Lone_er on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 11:59:12 AM AEST
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| A short but very powerful write ma'am. One I know I can relate to.Hugs Jenni...Russ |
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Re: ~You Make Me Smile~
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 12:30:21 PM AEST
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Very nice. Ahhh how much eaiser it is to smile cause you can, and not force a smile. Might as well frown then. Great write.. Sweet..
MaJ |
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Re: ~You Make Me Smile~
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by pixie on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 02:49:55 PM AEST
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aww Jenni, that made me smile :) excellent poem,filled with happiness, lovely *hugs*
love Pix xxxxx |
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Re: ~You Make Me Smile~
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 10:13:42 PM AEST
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A very nice write for your friend.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~You Make Me Smile~
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by elle on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 11:04:57 PM AEST
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| & your write makes me smile. . .thanks. peace.elle |
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Re: ~You Make Me Smile~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 01:47:02 AM AEST
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A Ha!
So those times I made you smile..they were fake!!!!!
pouts :(
j/k
Good friends are awsome! |
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Re: ~You Make Me Smile~
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by holy on
Sunday, 11th May 2008 @ 12:09:30 AM AEST
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| Well done, I enjoy it so much. |
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