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This Demon
Contributed by
xoBrokenxo
on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 07:42:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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I ache to tell you.
But I wonder if you’ll believe it’s true.
Every fiber in my being wants to tell you.
Someone must know before I die.
I have to try.
My stomach—it must have ruptured.
I call out in the dark, but no one answered.
My throat—it is bleeding.
Yet I don’t feel a thing.
All I see is the red that comes out every time.
Please listen to this rhyme,
Please help me
To help you see.
This…thing inside of me must end;
Help my heart to mend.
Promise to listen to my confessions and not judge.
I wouldn’t be able to go on if you held a grudge.
This is hard for me—
This demon inside is very powerful.
It doesn’t want me to let go.
But it needs to be told no.
I ache to tell you.
But I wonder if you’ll believe me if I do.
Copyright ©
xoBrokenxo
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2008-05-09 07:42:20]
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Re: This Demon
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by prabal77 on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 10:30:31 AM AEST
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| there's a demon inside of every body..the thing is that u confessed....and that too so beautifully... |
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Re: This Demon
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by Roddy on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 01:34:39 PM AEST
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| Great poem because just about anyone can relate. Good Job. |
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Re: This Demon
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by SilverRain on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 12:55:03 AM AEST
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| a good expressive piece. brought your feelings across well. |
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Re: This Demon
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by owkenny on
Monday, 19th May 2008 @ 02:27:05 AM AEST
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| thats a mighty decent poem. the word play was alright but not too spectacular in my opinion |
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Re: This Demon
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by ratty on
Tuesday, 20th May 2008 @ 04:28:11 AM AEST
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| nothing special but nice to read once |
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