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Every Secret We Keep
Contributed by
justme03
on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 03:06:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Every secret we keep &
every step we take,
we end up going in
the wrong direction,
getting caught up in
the mess of deception.
So easy to lie,
it has just
become truth.
It is only a matter of time
Before it all falls down
around us.
This wall of lies we built
will no longer
protect us.
Honesty pours in from
such a pretty mouth,
feeding on crooked truth.
It is all just the same now.
There’s no where left to hide
when truth and lies collide.
So exposed and so cold,
wrapped tight in the spiders thread,
stuck strong on the spiders web.
Copyright ©
justme03
... [
2008-05-09 03:06:19]
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Re: Every Secret We Keep
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by trueecho on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 03:09:25 AM AEST
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huh! i like the one i wrote today too..and i like this poem ..it flows very nicely and the truth is spoken no doubt..thanks
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Re: Every Secret We Keep
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by SilverRain on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 06:15:40 AM AEST
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| well done. A really touching piece. Keep them coming. |
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Re: Every Secret We Keep
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by xoBrokenxo on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 07:44:26 AM AEST
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The first part kind of reminds me of a song. Good write!
~Broken |
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Re: Every Secret We Keep
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by prabal77 on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 10:31:58 AM AEST
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| gr88 writing man..nice work.....keep it up...really liked it |
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