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Contributed by
arijadna77
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Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 06:29:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In a darkness
While I’m putting back the chains
Four walls are laid on my back head
Echo of lost creature
Reminds that being crazy is normal thing
And no one hears
And no one sees
And no one tries to stay silent about the Truth
That came from the dry lips of a Grey-haired stranger
And I will put back that nameless hand to my body
And I will tremble
While I’m waiting for a Hades to open
And I will throw my clew
In the blackest corner
Copyright ©
arijadna77
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2008-05-08 18:29:37]
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Re: no title
(User Rating: 1 )
by SilverRain on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 06:42:35 AM AEST
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| A thought provoking and very deep piece. really enjoyed this. |
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by Roddy on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 01:30:36 PM AEST
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| Dark poem. Sounds almost like a nightmare I had once. Very good |
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by Roddy on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 01:32:37 PM AEST
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| OH And thanks for your comment on my rant. I want to really thank you though for your honest opinion. I try to fix those things as best as I am able. |
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by safetyinnumbers on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 04:28:15 PM AEST
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Hi, nice poem...I like the dark mood it creates, the walls remind me of the walls I feel at times in my own mind....good work...
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Re: no title
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by Arijadna77 on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 06:35:08 PM AEST
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| Finally,i have more than one comment!Yeeeeeeeee!!!Hheheeh,than u guys,i really appreciate every opinion:))) |
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