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A Fallen Star
Contributed by
texasw97
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Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 04:41:28 PM in AEST
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Tired and bored I continue to sit
Wishing my life was over with
I’m tired of being places I don’t fit
I’m raising my hands in the air I quit
I’m left alone and unhappy in this world
I no longer have value as if I was a pearl
I feel like a piece of dirt
Yeah, that’s about all I’m worth
I continue to go through pain and agony each day
Still feeling hopeless no matter how hard I pray
There is nothing to read that will give me a little spark
I’m itching for the lights to go off so I can sit in the dark
That way you can’t see the tears go down my face
No one to call me Dad for I think I’ve been replaced
With that thought in my mind I continue to cry
I’m began you Lord please just let me die
I no longer want to live here on Earth
Go ahead and put me in a black hearse
And may I have peace as I lay six feet in the dirt
For I am a man who was cursed since birth
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Re: A Fallen Star
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by Arijadna77 on
Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 06:34:14 PM AEST
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You are speaking in the name of many others...
And you have to find someone,someone enough "crazy" to share your madness...
Great poem,i really think so... |
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Re: A Fallen Star
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by Xmorbid6childrnx on
Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 10:23:26 PM AEST
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| This is sad. Good job writing it. |
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Re: A Fallen Star
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 06:16:35 AM AEST
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Nicely written.... hope things are better..
Jenni |
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Re: A Fallen Star
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by brew on
Friday, 9th May 2008 @ 11:36:09 AM AEST
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STOP!~
Your good
We all cant have it all at once
So you fell
You lost
I am sorry and hope it can be regained......I know
I always LOSE
So........smile, breathe and hope
ITS THERE!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are beautiful
HUGS brew aka Dayna~ |
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Re: A Fallen Star
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by Collie on
Saturday, 10th May 2008 @ 02:00:39 AM AEST
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| Very sad and written wtith true heart! |
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