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HOPELESS
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brew
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Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 12:44:07 PM in AEST
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Something has inspired
Something has happened
The heart is hit
How can I control?
How can i face?
This time its left undetected........I CAN NOT TAKE
Im left with nothing.....
SIGHS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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brew
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2008-05-08 12:44:07]
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Re: HOPELESS
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 12:53:18 PM AEST
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Hi Brew,
This sound really hopeless..so I guess your poem did what it was meant to do...
Are you all right? Let me know..ok
Jenni |
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Re: HOPELESS
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by Arijadna77 on
Thursday, 8th May 2008 @ 06:50:13 PM AEST
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"Im left with nothing....."
No,you are not,you have this words you wrote|:))) |
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Re: HOPELESS
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by MajesticPoet on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:08:58 PM AEST
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Painfull.... Then we are all left with nothing in one way or another. The thing is to empower that "something" that you have .Cause even though we see nothing through the nothingness, nothing is still something. And something is better then nothing. Very good write. Very too the point.. Keep them coming, and let them out. Better to write about that in which so many others want to fight about.
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Re: HOPELESS
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 10:03:44 PM AEST
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OH sweetie, I feel this ... oh GOD do I feel this!
I know it's desperate, this waiting, longing, needing ... and
it seems just when you think it may be answered, it
winds up UNanswered instead. ack ..
chin up sweets. I know it's easy to say, but your time is on the way
HUGS by the dozen!
~Breezy
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Re: HOPELESS
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by wheels on
Tuesday, 1st July 2008 @ 01:29:38 PM AEST
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Again expressing the moment. Not easy to do. But it defintiely expresses your pain.
--Kevin
the lonely vagabond |
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Re: HOPELESS
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by Crow on
Monday, 11th August 2008 @ 01:19:33 PM AEST
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| Brew your so down in this write..I to hope your ok. I`m not much of a jabber-box but you can light me up anytime you like. Lane |
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