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Sailing On A Sinking Ship
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 09:53:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Sailing this ocean with no fixed course in mind,
Not knowing what my final destination will be.
Braving the winds and the torrid rains,
As I journey upon this wide open sea.
Sailing this ocean for quite a long time,
Yet I知 no closer to your heart,
But the one thing that I知 certain of,
Is that we値l never be anything but apart.
Many a night I致e been tempted to dock,
To shelter from the turbulent rain.
But this journey has been quite pleasant so far,
And there hasn稚 been too much pain.
So aboard this sinking ship I値l stay,
Hoping that maybe one day soon,
I値l find my way into a small corner of your heart
With the help of the silvery moon.
Copyright ﾂｩ
Jenni_K
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2008-05-07 09:53:39]
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Re: Sailing On A Sinking Ship
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 10:19:08 AM AEST
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Very lovely write and I do not think you are sailing on a sinking ship just sailing.
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Re: Sailing On A Sinking Ship
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 11:27:15 AM AEST
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Jenni,
possibly the best thing that could happen is for the ship to sink and let the dolphin find its way to the final destination. Just a thought. Another touching write my friend.
Deadwriter
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Re: Sailing On A Sinking Ship
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 12:43:46 PM AEST
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Beautiful write my friend...I have sailed those waters but alas my ship wrecked...but I am fine now...many hugs
Shari |
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Re: Sailing On A Sinking Ship
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 10:09:35 AM AEST
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| sometimes the ship will only sink if you want it to- sometimes it will anyway either way very nice write thanks for the poem |
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Re: Sailing On A Sinking Ship
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 01:20:24 PM AEST
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| a very cute love poem, it certainly tugged on the heartstrings. |
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