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To you suiside writters
Contributed by
spooky
on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 01:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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We read poems from authors,,
who write about,,
Love, hate, life, fantasy, death,,
there's births, birthdays, and sorrows,,
then we have SUISIDES,,,
Why must people write about suiside,,
what makes them believe,
that there death would be better??,,
if their lifes are not good there,
then leave the area where it is bad,,
if a person is unhappy,,
they have the right to change things,,
NOT SUISIDE,,
life is to precious to give up on,,
to give up on life, would be a waste,,
especially to someone who cares for them,,
the family,,friends,,
I read so much of death,, wars,,murders,,
it's all wrong,,all of it is wrong,,
you the writters of susides,,
your wanted in life, the gift of love,
the gift of poetry,, the gift of life,,
you must show them that your better,,
not as someone who,,
could just give up on anything,,
your better in what you give,,
what you have to offer,,
the gift of life,,
to express yourself,
in ways that no one could ever imagine,,
it's your life,,to change,,
to be better,,
if not for them,,
for yourself,,
you must want it,,
to have it,
you must believe in what you have,
express it in words,,express it emotions,,
they will know ,,
your very special person,,
to many deaths are going on now,,
lets not make you the next,,
craig s. meeks
Copyright ©
spooky
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by lilch4ever on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 02:16:01 PM AEST
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| WOW that was very touching and so true. I'm just blown away by this one. Very good, beautiful write. I think you have touched someone's life today :) |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by wyrd_faerie on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:16:14 PM AEST
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| this is very touching...but sometimes it's just hard to believe the stuff you said you know? but very good, i like it a lot... |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:52:09 PM AEST
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| good write..very true..death does not end the problem..and creates more for the loved ones. |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 08:35:31 PM AEST
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For starters very brave poem. Secondly, if u dont like reading suicide poetry then why do u read it? Very simple if u dont like that genre don't open the poem. Thirdly to speak for myself i write those kind of poems to deal with the depression and suicidal thoughts and I am sure many others do as well. I find its better to write out what I feel instead of actually doing it.
I think I understand what u mean by the poem but if you've ever been depressed you would know how hard it is to get out of that hole... just my thoughts...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 08:52:16 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is good.... hopefully it will help some people whom are thinking of commiting suicide but I have to agree with bobotheclown and wyrd_faerie cuz I have also been there myself and still am going through a bit of it... if it was that easy to do what you are saying in this poem, everything would be sunshine and flowers and happiness would be all around but sadly it isn't.... |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by shelby on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 01:47:49 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem. Your right life is precious. I feel alot of people who are hurting so bad and end their life dont realize they are putting those left behind into the same sort of loss and depression they felt before they ended it all. I'm on the recieving end of a recent suicide and believe me when I say the person who goes away leaves behind many hurting people here on earth. |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by mblondiepink on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 01:55:51 AM AEST
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Nice poem but some poeple deal with depression and suicide by writing about it. I enjoy reading about those things b/c it makes me feel better. It's sad that suicide happens but it does.
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 09:24:41 AM AEST
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Craig well said on this,so very true!
A very touching write but this needs to come out! Christina |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by venkat on
Saturday, 15th March 2003 @ 04:29:23 AM AEST
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| Dear Craig , you are great , your message is very much needed.. It is really good. many a time I too felt the same feelings. well done. venkat |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 06:25:39 AM AEST
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| to some extent i agree with bobo, if you dont like it dont read it, on the other hand your expression is as valid as anyone's |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by yellow_sundragon on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 04:59:06 PM AEST
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Only once, in my entire 17 years of existance, did I truly try... and that poems on here. I write depressing poems to figure myself out. When the poem is finished, I tend to know what's bugging me, and I fix it. But I understand your message. I really do. And I thank you for it.
YS |
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Re: To you suiside writters
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 04:16:47 PM AEST
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| this poem was really good and i've been through it and its not easy. its something that takes time and patence believe me i know. i don't talk about i tmuch but i know i should to make myself feel good so like many i write my hopes,fears,and feelings in poems, pen and paper were my best friend when i was going through depression and just remember that the greatest gift u can give someone who is depressed are you ears, meaning lisen to them always. |
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