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Outer Space (Air, I hate the taste)
Contributed by
Zork
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Tuesday, 6th May 2008 @ 08:31:56 AM in AEST
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To the left of Earth,
I can play ball,
In gravity,
I'm not so tall.
Orion taught me how to rhyme,
Speaking at the speed of time.
The man in the moon,
Will retire soon,
Less of a madman,
More of a Loon.
There are stars on the walk,
Not the Hollywood way,
There is time to relax,
In a seven year day.
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Zork
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2008-05-06 08:31:56]
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Re: Outer Space (Air, I hate the taste)
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by safetyinnumbers on
Tuesday, 6th May 2008 @ 07:59:14 PM AEST
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Nice write....I like the rhyme in it too. |
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Re: Outer Space (Air, I hate the taste)
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by Arijadna77 on
Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 08:05:29 PM AEST
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| I love the way you are playing with words |
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