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I will not die tonight
Contributed by
Roddy
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Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 03:30:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As the darkness flows through the night unweary, unshaken to envelope my plight.
Black and bloodied this wound has become
Scrathing and gnawing from dusk till dawn
Quivering is my suicidal soul for I feel the puncture of this affliction for which i've grown a attraction
Screaming from mountain tops, wreathing in pits, from which no man may lift
How I miss the days of old, for which I long to make the changes for a much diffrent, less anguished soul
Aching my heart truly is, but this the life for which we are all dealt ,and no not I will die tonight
Copyright ©
Roddy
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2008-05-04 15:30:15]
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Re: I will not die tonight
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by shelby on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 03:42:19 PM AEST
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I so agree about different ways of killing our souls or others in some cases killing our souls.
Nicely done. Welcome
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Re: I will not die tonight
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by catz77 on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 06:05:10 PM AEST
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Well done, good write.
Catz ^_^
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Re: I will not die tonight
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by Arijadna77 on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 08:31:49 PM AEST
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| Every night i lie down with the same thought...i will not die tonight...I love ur poem. |
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Re: I will not die tonight
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by flamingblade on
Monday, 5th May 2008 @ 12:14:23 AM AEST
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I also agree with killing our souls. We casue our own destruction in the end.
Well written, thanks for sharing
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