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The far outreaching door
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:30:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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To enter the far outreaching door
The rain continues—
I am out of words—
The world has birthed in storm
The far outreaching door
I smile, and mountains
Stretch for miles
Until reaching long abandoned shores
The rain continues on—
I am out of words—
Entering the far outreaching door
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iodinelove
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2008-05-04 10:30:03]
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Re: The far outreaching door
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by Zork on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:52:33 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem, cool style, I enjoyed it a lot. |
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Re: The far outreaching door
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by holy on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 04:05:19 PM AEST
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| I can catch the central thought of the article, good job. |
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Re: The far outreaching door
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by zenith66 on
Thursday, 15th May 2008 @ 02:30:28 AM AEST
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| Hey i just stumbled across your poetry and am thrilled to notice that i love it, amazingly unique, youve got a dreamy kind of way of telling things, i cant wait to read your others, this is a fabulous peice of work, the far outreaching door, it just brought so many things to mind, and so many images of mountains and abandonded shores, so many great lines in there, really profound i must say, well done i love it!!! |
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