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Under the umbrella

Contributed by holy on Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:12:03 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Under the umbrella

That was a early morning on sunday

you visited me very early

you told me that day would be our day

you have enough time with me to go to the garden

When I heard about it

I was very happy

In fact

whenever we met I was always filled with joy

It was cloudy

I said we should take an umbrella just as a precaution

At that moment we left home

My hand had circled your arm

You told me you had the same dream

When we arrived the gate of the garden

it really started raining

"What a cool day,

how could you know it will rain?"

you ask me with a laugh

"I like to watch the weather forecast,

according to the weather forecast,

it will rain today."

I leaned towards you

and whispered the answer to you

Absolutely

the beautiful house you had told appeared over the hill

I was going to there have a refreshing time

you smiled at me saying to visit around the garden first

We walked and talked under the umbrella

first of all I just smiled to listen to your happy words

then I started to ask about your problems

you inhaled deeply

"Today is our lovely day,

there will be no any problems surround me.

How glad I am you take your precious time with me!

thank you for your valuable service."

I felt you were very relax from your lips

"Such a precious gift you giving me,

I am deeply touched.

I know you are very busy and tired every day,

don't too worry about me,

you need to have enough time to have a rest on weekends."

I forget to look at the beautiful sights

because I was enjoying your breath

When we walked to the house

the rain stopped

I folded the umbrella

then just wanted enter the room

I saw a couple of lovers standing inside

a girl was in a boy's arms

the boy was going to kiss her lips

I held your hand and running away quickly

you asked me what happened

I suddenly felt very shy

I said nothing and put my hands on my chest

I was praying for the couple of lovers

I hoped they would never be disturbed

Copyright © holy ... [ 2008-05-04 10:12:03]
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