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Goodbye
Contributed by
6whiteRoses
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Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 09:33:18 AM in AEST
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goodbyepoetry
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I know I'm alive
But I really feel dead
Saying goodbye
Not something I dread
I put on a smile
To hide all the pain
Moving to Georgia
I would count as a gain
I have to get out
Escape this burden I bear
I need to get help
Leaving you in God's care
So I hope you'll forgive me
I really have tried
One day you'll see me
But for now it's goodbye
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6whiteRoses
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2008-05-04 09:33:18]
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Re: Goodbye
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by ZiggyB on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:17:52 AM AEST
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Hope everything works out.
Nice write.
~Stephan |
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Re: Goodbye
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by iodinelove on
Sunday, 4th May 2008 @ 10:32:11 AM AEST
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If you mean Georgia as in the southern united states, why would you do that to yourself?
I live in Georgia, and trust me, it's not somewhere you want to live.
Unless you like hicks.... |
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Re: Goodbye
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by 6whiteRoses on
Wednesday, 7th May 2008 @ 02:00:18 AM AEST
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| I would be moving to Georgia with my fiance and in with his aunt...so with were I would be moving it is beautiful....It's Gainesvill, GA. |
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