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Leaving It behind
Contributed by
Crimsonflame
on
Saturday, 3rd May 2008 @ 02:20:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Stepping to leave behind,
A trail of landmines,
Walking, walking, with no signs,
But still, with a determined mind.
Step by step gets harder,
The legs ache as it gets further,
The heart cries and tears blubber,
But my resolve did not waver.
It is not really easy,
To leave behind a meadow so grassy,
The simple and the breezy,
For the wild tempestuous sea.
But it is the matter of choosing,
The only option in this little thing,
You and I call it moving,
Forward, forward, I am moving.
No glance behind,
No more doubts in my mind.
Copyright ©
Crimsonflame
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2008-05-03 02:20:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Leaving It behind
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 3rd May 2008 @ 01:25:19 PM AEST (User
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First thing I noticed right away is the way in which this was written it seemed to bounce and move on adding to the message that I liked a lot. The message is awesome too forward you go and keep right on!
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